Draft- Grade/Changes

After getting the feedback for my magazine i have realised that there is a lot of changes and improvements that i really want to make to all of the pages. The page that i want to change most is my contents page, i really do not like this page so i need to look into more styles of these to get more inspiration. On my double page spread i really like the layout, by having a picture on one half of the page and the article on the other half of the page i want to make some slight changes like the setting of the picture and look that the double page spread is giving off. My front cover needs work on the font, sizes and image, i think the layout is good because it doesn’t look too crammed but it doesn’t look too bare. Over all i would give myself a 2/3 as there is evidence of skills being used on photo shop but there is still a lot that can be improved.